Anyways, this is something new. I decided to skip ahead on the rewrite and do a snippet from a completely new idea. There was a chunk of about 3 chapters that are getting cut completely and replaced by a different idea. This is the other idea, designed for my MCs now-younger age. It's long, but it reads easily.
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*snipped*
8 comments:
Very cool. I really like this snippet, I'm intrigued!
I also like this! I think it is much more fun to read then a dinner party!
I LOVE this. I'm totally hooked.
Adarin is yummy :p Especially considering that his play by is William Mosely.
Okay I really like Adarian :)
OH baby... he needs her there!
This is awesome! Loved reading it..
I like this! Adarin is pretty cool. :)
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