Teaser Tuesday 3!

It's technically Tuesday and everyone at AW knows what that means!....We all get a lovely round of teasers! I'm very excited to keep reading. Everyone has such amazing ideas and writing styles and humor...I can't get enough! I'm happy to post something new, instead of JP excerpts. Don't get me wrong, JP is my baby, but I'm tired of never having new characters, new plot, new settings. Today is an exerpt from Feral, the new YA Urban fiction. I apologize for grammatical errors and the like, I didn't really edit. It's fresh off the computer :D 2860 words written today alone on Feral. I even did a good 500 words for the JP rewrite. So proud!
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10 comments:

Krista Ashe said...

Oh, I like it...it's creepy, and I want to know more about the world she's in and what all is going on....love the title too!

thepix said...

Oh, this is going to be a good one!!! Very intriguing! I love the world you've created! I wanna read more!

Becca said...

This is very dark. But for some reason, I laughed at this line: "Dear? What a time to sound polite." ahahaha

Still love the title and premise of this! :)

Sarah said...

I was waiting for her to shove the syringe into the doctors forehead and then I was like... oh wait... this isn't Neira...

LAWL

I like the description of the guy that steps inside at the end. I instantly didn't like him. Is that a good thing?

Leah Michelle said...

Yes. You shouldn't like him...at first :D

La-La-La-Laurie said...

What a badass MC. Seriously, I really liked it. I really want to know where it's going.

Ugh, such a tease! :)

bethany said...

Interesting. I love dark futuristic stuff. Thik it's going to be the "in" thing for awhile, too. Nice job!

Lunar Amyscope said...

I like this!!!!!!!!!

Paranormalchick said...

Wow, very intense. I was reading it thinkin' "WOW" the whole time! Great job, I really like this dark world. Being a nurse and all I esp. like the needle thing. Muwhahahaha we hold all the power with those needles! LOL Good Job. I rally, eally liked it!

Stephanie said...

Very nice. Now I'm all creeped out before bed. I can't wait to read more of this!

 
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