Teased!

Why yes, I have started Teaser Tuesdays again with the lovely ladies at AW. I must say, it feels excellent. A seriously brief update first followed by a section of Concealed that I really like as an unofficial query.

Words: 12446
Chapters: 7
Pages: 46

Not too bad. It's going by quickly. Well, only the teaser :)


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15 comments:

Anonymous said...

Sounds scarily like the Holocaust. I'm interested in where you are taking this.

Sumayyah said...

I love the world building! It's very vivid.

Lee Bross said...

Very nice setup. Giving backstory, but not in an infodumpy way. Great job!

Kaitlin Ward said...

So cool. This sounds like a very interesting story!

Laurie said...

I really like the world-building here. And you get a good sense of the character.

Amanda said...

I like your world building also. I really want to see where this is going. Welcome to the club!

houndrat said...

Yep, I'm super intrigued by your world! Love the last line too--kinda chilling in how casual it is.

VĂ©ro L said...

oh sounds like a very interesting story! I want to know more!

Anonymous said...

Ooh, lots of intrigue--I like it! I'd love to learn more about those Drifties... keep teasing!

Raven M said...

Ooh, I love the world building! And the voice is amazing. From start to finish, I was hooked and I hope you tease next week!

Lily Meade said...

I love it! Very great command of first person.

Rebecca A. Rogers said...

This is really interesting. Sounds like you're doing great as far as word count goes! *pulls out pom-poms and cheers* :D

Annie McElfresh said...

WOW!! So far so good! I love how this story is coming together, and the discriptions were great :)

Amna said...

Really great descriptions of the setting!

Karla Calalang said...

Wow, I'm intrigued! I want to know more about these Drifties! Can't wait to find out more!

 
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