Another Tease.

Another snippet from my WIP Time Lost. Still loving the story, still loving the characters...especially Leo. *snuggles*

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9 comments:

Kate Hart said...

LOL-- You managed to work "shank" in there! Nice work.

Kathy Bradey said...

Ooooh, I noticed the "shank" part, too! Yeey! :D

Aside from that, I love the dialogue. So snarky and great.

Kaitlin Ward said...

LOL at shank.
Dialogue is fantastic. I was so hooked :)

Ellen said...

Haha! I like Sydney :) Great dialogue and voice here, it's really fun!

Krista Ashe said...

OMG, I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it!!! The chemistry between the characters is AWESOME! And I was already snorting when I read your opening about her lusting after Hayden. I can't wait to see where this is going. Where ya beeen hiding this?

HUGGLES MY SPARKLY GAL!!

Bri said...

Great dialogue! The dynamic between the characters is fantastic.

Karla Nellenbach said...

hahaha...shank! lol i love your characters...esp Leo

Angelica R. Jackson said...

Your characters ring true; even though this is the first time I've met them, I get a sense of their personalities from the dialogue. Well done!

Kristin Briana Otts said...

I have decided that I like Sydney. It's official. :D

 
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