I'm super excited about this series, having abandoned my others temporarily to pursue this one. I'm a good chunk into it, working my way to the scene that I posted part of last night in Friday Night Write (sorry if you read it already. I just kind of love it.)
Basically, it's Sierra--waking from a nearly-fatal wound--and Leo--one of Sierra's best friends--watching over her as she recovers. These two kind of own my heart right now.
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Great concept, Leah! I particularly love this part: "His words broke me, scattered pieces of me in the wind. Was I even worth repairing? Was I worth salvaging if only chucks remained? Nothing whole, nothing solid. Just a shadow of what I once was."
Gorgeous and well written.
This is truly awesome writing, I love it. I really like the sound of Leo, poor guy :(
Great tease!
I really, really love the descriptions here. Your writing style is great! I want to know what's going on with Sierra and why Hayden tried to kill her. That's just cruel, getting stabbed by someone you loved...
I am in love with this.
If you are in the market for betas at some point, you know where to find me :)
This is AWESOME - I WANT MORE!!!! Nice concept too! I'm excited to see what comes of this!
Loved this! The descriptions were amazing, and I just need to know more about Hayden and Sierra and of course, about Leo.
woah Leah! I love it. the names of the charactera are AWESOME! would've loved to read more.
Great concept. I look forward to reading more about this book!
your writing is so fluid, and the idea is cool and unique...so what happens if something that was supposed to happen doesn't?
Man, your idea is insane! As in, really awesome! Your teaser was great too. Loved it!
"I'll fix this. I'll fix you..."
^ That tugged at the ol' heart-strings :P. Beautiful!
Awww... Poor Sierra :( Gorgeous writing, and it makes me want to stab the Hayden guy back <.< Leo seems like a sweetie though!
I love this idea!! So original. :D
P.S. - Sierra and Leo kinda have my heart now too. Just saying. <33
Eek super intense. The details are just amazing. Love it.
LEAH!!! WOW!!! This is awesomesauce!!! The Concept Rawks!!
AWWWWW.
I wish I had more to say, but that's about all I'm capable of - AWWWW.
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