I apologize that I won't be able to read everyone's teasers until late, late, late tonight or tomorrow. Trying to squeeze in as much writing and blogging and lurking as I can get between work.
Anyways, here is an exerpt from Jaded Portal.
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*snipped*
10 comments:
Ooh, great emotions and tension, Leah! I really liked it :D
LOVED the tension!!
I love the relationship you're building - they have great chemistry!
Wow, intense. I love the fireworks and tension.
Neira is such a strong character, but I love the show of vulnerability here. Awesome chemistry, too.
I love the chemistry and my favourite was the dialogue
AWWW!!!!
I just got super giddy from reading this again. It's been a while. I like Neira a lot. Her conscience is hard to figure out.
Love,love,love romantic tension! You're doing a great job :) Nice snip!
DAMN this was awesome! Loved the tension! :D
I absolutely love the emotion in this, the tension had me practically hyperventilating and I don't even know the rest of the story, but I would like to! :) Can't wait till next Tuesday!
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